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So here's the first chapter of that Dragon Age fan fic I was talking about. Enjoy, there's more to come ^^

I was writing a different Dragon Age fan fic a while back. This is a completely different story, and  better one at that I think because I'm gonna really try not to do everything exactly how it happened in the game. Some things will be the same, but not everything. It should be fun ^^ 

Also I need some help coming up with a title for this story. There has to be something better the Dragon Age Origins Fan Fiction (DAOFF), right? :shrug: I am just horrible with coming up with names, so if anyone has any ideas, please let me know =)

Thanks for reading! =D

Just a few little tid bits before we get going all the way:
    -This story is going to be very violent, bloody and adult at points. If you don't like it, don't read it.
    -I'm not sure yet, but there might be some characters from the game I leave out, like Sten, but I'm not sure just yet. We'll see when we get there
    -I will be using dialog from the game, but I'm not claiming it as my own. Props to the script writes for this game. They did a bang up job

Chapter 1 - Here
Chapter 2 - sillyguardtard.deviantart.com/…

I don't own the game Dragon Age Origins or it's characters. Those both belong to BioWare.
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YAYZ BLOOD! :lol: But seriously, I really love how descriptive you're being here. Headbang! Were you listening to "Let the Bodies Hit the Floor" while writing this again?

Does River really not remember her name, or does she just wanna hide it from Duncan for one reason or another? 'Cause it seems like her name would be one of the first things she would remember, rather than what exactly happened before she was knocked out. Just curious, not scrutinizing.

There are quite a few proofreading issues of missing letters/words in this draft, which is fine for the first draft, but you might wanna look back on it if you ever finish the story. DON'T EDIT AS YOU GO, THOUGH! A lot of stories get ruined inside the brain because it just wants to correct everything as it goes. Just let the story flow right out of you. :heart:

Love it! Can't wait to read the next chapter!